Sylvia A ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-06
Meena, this is a joy to read. It is so obvious that your boys are the light of your life. Well done.
DreamOfOlwin ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-06
Omgudness.... What a wonderful poem you have penned Meena! I totally loved it. Its funny, I had thought of writing a similar piece, but it just didnt come to me... but you're words have summed up EXACTLY how my little darlings make me feel! :) A REAL joy to read Meena :)) Excellent.
Rainbow Dancing ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-06
Meena this is maybe my favorite poem of all time. It's easy to see the love you have for your children. How lucky to have you as their mom.
Beautiful poem as always
Quiet Insanity ( F C D )
at 2009-11-06
Meena this was wonderful. We have some awesome mothers on this site.
Can you imagine the smiles these will bring when they are adults. Knowing how mom felt for them?
kelleyana ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-06
This is absolutely wonderful Meena. As a mom i got feelings like this daily and each time that i'm done, i just need to looked around and there the reason to lift me up. Well done, kel.
Ingrid ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-07
Meena,
The love you have for your children pours out of every syllable of this dedication.
You wrote it well, I could not think of a finer way to honor those, who bring us, mothers, so much joy!
God bless:)
5/5 Ingrid
Cherimari2
at 2009-11-10
I enjoyed! You built on your point with each stanza. You kept it to the point...without being pointed! Very Nice!!
Hugs...
Mari
lostlove1 ( F C D )
at 2009-11-16
Is'nt it funny that no matter how bad things are...when we look into the eyes of our children..everything is sudenly ok. Children are a gift from God.
Robert Gardiner ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-18
Another Wonderful Write, Excellent Meena!!!
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