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Stephanie Michelle ( C ) at 2009-11-05

Awe i like this one too! It's very cute(:

You should get someone to read over your work before posting though.. To edit grammar and what not.

:)

Michael D Nalley ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-06

I promise that when the darkness of youre night
covers the light of youre sky
I'll be there to make it bright

i promise that when the tears of pain and sorrow
are running Down youre cheek
I'll be there To dry them away
and to say something sweet till i see a smile on youre face

i promise that when u are afraid And confuse
I'll be there as the blanket u use
i promise that when lonlyness becomes a part
of youre life

I'll be there to Hold comfort u and Listen
i promise that if Youre afraid Of
Running on Youre own
I'll run with you even if i Fear the unknown

i promise that for you I will go to the
end of the world
because they aint words to measure what u are worth

authentic broken english would be editted as follows

I promise that when the darkness of your night
covers the light of your sky
I'll be there to make it bright

I promise that when the tears of pain and sorrow
are running down your cheek
I'll be there to dry them away
and to say something sweet till I see a smile on youre face

i promise that when u are afraid and confused
I'll be there as the blanket you've used
i promise that when loneliness becomes an part
of your life

I'll be there to Hold comfort you and Listen
i promise that if You're afraid of
Running on Your own
I'll run with you even if I Fear the unknown

i promise that for you I will go to the
end of the world
because they aint words to measure what you are worth

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