Kurt ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-28
This poem is definately heartfelt and emotional. It really does put strain on both people involved. I have been 'that boy' who fell head over heels for someone and had them admit that though they 'like' me they just can't commit to a relationship. It is a tough and difficult situation. This poem does a wonderful job describing how it feels and what it is like.
The rhythm and flow also fit together well to help the reader ease through the story. The seamlessness of the transitions between stanzas was creatively done and enjoyable. All in all this poem was quite well written. 5/5
HillaryNicole ( P C )
at 2009-10-28
Loved it! Definitely got your point across and beautifully written. Transitions couldnt have been smoother. And your words couldnt have made more sense.
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