Comments

DreamOfOlwin ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-15

Very well written and expressed. . With a lot of feeling. I love how your poems rhyme. . Have a good flow and a message that all can relate too. Well done !

Ozzy N Vavy ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-15

Wow! i loved it. it was great big bro. had so much meaning. 5/5

*Val

All Angel No Wings ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-15

That was beautiful of course. as always :)
so much feeling in this one.
loved it!

Karl Wild ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-17

The flow was pretty good for most of the poem but in the last stanza the words seemed a bit forced. Love is a difficult thing to understand and no matter how many times our heart gets broken, it still hurts just as much as the time before. Good job GG23

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