Maya ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-07
Melody,
Secrets
Our bond to keep
others safe from our wrath.
Sisterhood of venting poets
Smile
Dedicated to Sylvia :]
^^
I must admit I do not understand what you are saying here...
When I read it correctly you are saying that others are safe from you and Silvia's wrath because you have each other to confide in?
Lol, I don't understand!
I hope you will add something to this poem, please inform me when you do, then I will come back to vote on it, alright?
*hugs*
Ingrid
MelodyAnn ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-07
The form is complete as it is.
Cinquain is a short, usually unrhymed poem consisting of twenty-two syllables distributed
as 2, 4, 6, 8, 2, in five lines.
It simply means having each other to vent too keeps others from having to hear us. A sister bond all though not biological.
The poem wasn't meant to be analyzed just a fun little write. I am sure each of us have a secret sister/brother to vent too.
A weapon of sanity in a sometimes hectic world
T e m p s ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-07
*tears hair out*
okay, muchhh better.
Melody! This was amazing (: Sylvia as well as anyone is is lucky to have a friendship with you. You are an awesome girl who will listen to anyone. Never stop who you are or change yourself for that matter.
Well done. :]
Maya ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-07
Aha, it is by chance I reread these comments and see the explanation, Melody.
Usually it is written after the title, if it is a formatted poem. Well, I will give you a rating then, now I know how your words were intended:)
It is nice you have found a sister in Silvia, I am sure you two are soulmates ( smiles)
*hugs*
Ingrid
Cindy ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-08
Melody
Great job on the form. I'm glad you have Sylvia :) It is the most wonderful feeling to have a special someone you can trust and confide in :)
Love Cindy
PinkySwear ( F C D )
at 2009-09-09
It's nice to read such sweet poems and in such a different format. I can see there is a lot of friendships built at this site. Wonderfully done.
Mr Rhee ( F P C )
at 2009-11-06
Venting can be such a wonderful release. Listening is usually a wonderful talent. Both, abilities hard to find in almost any one person, much less two friends. But, I guess that's what bonds friends have. You're both so lucky.
You made this look so simple. And we all know it's not. Awsome piece. Good work.
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