divine divinity ( F C D )
at 2009-09-12
Beautiful poem. I thought it very sweet, very well written, great flow and pace.
Shortest Straw ( F C D )
at 2009-09-15
"You can be serene, you can be buoyant
You can be rough, you can be elegant
You can love: One can never be sure,
Your eyes so clear, your heart so pure!"
I absolutely love this stanza, it flowed beautifully. Lets hope your tiny rose in a tiny dress liked it as much as I do. Great write =) 5/5
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